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Thursday 24 August 2017

The mudslide

Week 5   #45



World Events for your writing
I’m sure you won’t have missed the events in Barcelona, Spain this week or the devastation caused by the mud slide in Sierre Leone and the violence in Charlottesville, Virginia. The prompt this week uses the emotions that the media has shown us.

Latest prompt
As I said at the top of this page, the events around the world this week:

… as it came rushing towards us we…
The mudslide
There was a mudslide it was as big as a ship. Then over night there was  200 people that were killed in the night. I heard people yelling  I run  outside there were people , trying to get out of the mud.Then there were people asking for my help.
“Can you help me?”. I said
“ There yelling”they  asked for my for help. Wait I’m coming I said
“Sorry but I can't help you”. I will get stuck in the yucky drowning sticky  mud.I am going to have to run away now so good bye people” I said I am sorry








Friday 18 August 2017

TT & KMB 100 word challenge

Week 4:

This is the new 100 word challenge
You will be working in your Tuakana/Tēina pair for this writing task. You will be collaborating to create an exciting piece of writing together.
Before you start:
Make a copy of the file and save it in your tuhituhi folder. Name it “T3 W4 - 100 word challenge ” (then your initials)   
Learn:
Here is the latest prompt:

Just what is the story behind this character’s laughter?


The form will close on 19th August at 23.45 BST
Create:
WALT: Create a descriptive piece of writing through the eyes of the main character

We need to focus on these things:

  • Full stops and capital letters
  • Using language features to make our writing more interesting


Share:
Once this is completed you can publish it on your personal blogs.
      



The sea is a swirly storm.My laughter is unexpectedly contagious.My heart is thunder.the moss is like gold.The seal's nose is brown bark ,the pieces of seaweed are carrots.My whiskers are wire,my teeth are rocks.My nails are sharp knifes, my feet are 1 meter rulers.My stomach is an elephant,my fingers are sausages.The rocks are grey tiles,the leaves are carvings.The rocks are a crunchy bar my tongue is a red skin.The spots on my face are strawberries,the seaweed is a snail.My mouth is moving “Chop,chop,chop”.