WALT create a piece of writing which includes 5 words that we have been given. This week the words were: pink huge brids sprinkled and daffodil.
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Friday, 8 June 2018
Creative writing
One day there was a girl she live in a house in the forest. Aver day she would go over the log bridge. To go and pike Daffodil I can tell that I was getting closer to the Daffodil I was ofre on the other side it. 10 sec to get there her had to take a bac. Get there her had to take one step ford it
was 2 o cok in the morning her falod to sleep at 3 0 cok her
got up and carried on to find this pink Daffodil that was so huge it took 1 day to get there at last I got here had to tack a long time to get there was people there it was like a destr there but on the other side there was. A beche and there was lots of people there it was amazzy
Was I got there was crabes, tree, dofese and there was lot of kids their was house even a free treehouse for free it was old but I make it nice I even patit 10 Daffodil’s. Outside of the treehouse it look cool then the Nets day I had a hot Chocolate with Sprinkled and I got a colored. That like eta the colored will eat intheking it see the way.
there is going to be a foster Nets to my treehouse. They sater to grow they 5 day came and the tree wroun as tall then me the tree was as dig is my house. It had brarch like stars on it but not like woderit or. Drike stars it was grows I have not saw the tree grows like this it was cool so when it stat was 2sec ago I saw I was get hit up It was hiyr they my treehouse I was so scared of hit I was crying I was so sad so I hold the
tree I did. Not like it up her so I grad a lot of wood then I bet A house with lot of rope with my Magical powers the rope was not break a ball so I sated Build A bed it was caffe then my bed at the treehouse
I like how the day’s fend A house to stare at it was cool I what to do my trip Again it was a cool week feeding lot of Daffodil.
WALT create a piece of writing which includes 5 words that we have been given. This week the words were: pink huge brids sprinkled and daffodil.
WALT create a piece of writing which includes 5 words that we have been given. This week the words were: pink huge brids sprinkled and daffodil.
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