The mudslide

Week 5   #45

World Events for your writing

I’m sure you won’t have missed the events in Barcelona, Spain this week or the devastation caused by the mud slide in Sierre Leone and the violence in Charlottesville, Virginia. The prompt this week uses the emotions that the media has shown us.

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As I said at the top of this page, the events around the world this week:

… as it came rushing towards us we…

The mudslide

There was a mudslide it was as big as a ship. Then over night there was  200 people that were killed in the night. I heard people yelling  I run  outside there were people , trying to get out of the mud.Then there were people asking for my help.

“Can you help me?”. I said

“ There yelling”they  asked for my for help. Wait I’m coming I said

“Sorry but I can't help you”. I will get stuck in the yucky drowning sticky  mud.I am going to have to run away now so good bye people” I said I am sorry

Baby bear's present

WALT write a story based on a book

I wrote the story by myself...

Baby Bear’s   present.

Mother Bear and Father Bear  is get Baby Bear a present.

The three Baby looked in the shop window.

I like  cars said Baby Bear’s

Can I have the cars please

We will look at the toy said Mother Bear

I like the toy train said father Bear.

I can see a  key it makes the train go.

Baby Bear said No! No!

I like this cars kos I can ride a rad in it.

Can I please have this cars.

Father bear said I like this toy train a lot.

Mother bear said No this toy is not for you

No this toy isti  for me it is for baby bear

And he likes the blue car. If baby bear likes it we will get it for he look at me in the car. Mother Bear and Father Bear

Looked at Baby Bears.car  said Baby Bears I like my car it a good car.