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Tuesday 17 December 2019

On the moon

kia ora I am doing how would it be like on the moon and
 as i step on the moon hope you like it



1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Kisziah!

    My name is Mikey. I'm a part of the Summer Learning Journey team and I'll be commenting on some of your wonderful blog posts over the summer break. Congratulations on completing your first activity! :)

    What a great poem, Kisziah! I really like the part about the gravity lifting you up like a balloon - I can picture exactly what you mean. I like the way you've presented this activity as well. The colour caught my eye as soon as I came onto your blog. If you could, do you think you'd like to go to the moon?

    Also, just a little reminder to attribute any images you use that aren't your own. This simply means mentioning where you got the pictures from.

    Have a lovely day and keep up the awesome blogging! :)

    Mā te wā,

    Mikey

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