kia ora I am doing how would it be like on the moon and
as i step on the moon hope you like it
I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Kia ora Kisziah!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Mikey. I'm a part of the Summer Learning Journey team and I'll be commenting on some of your wonderful blog posts over the summer break. Congratulations on completing your first activity! :)
What a great poem, Kisziah! I really like the part about the gravity lifting you up like a balloon - I can picture exactly what you mean. I like the way you've presented this activity as well. The colour caught my eye as soon as I came onto your blog. If you could, do you think you'd like to go to the moon?
Also, just a little reminder to attribute any images you use that aren't your own. This simply means mentioning where you got the pictures from.
Have a lovely day and keep up the awesome blogging! :)
Mā te wā,
Mikey