Friday, 8 June 2018

Creative writing

One day there was a girl she live in a house in the forest. Aver day she would go over the log bridge. To go and pike Daffodil I can tell that I was getting closer to the Daffodil I was  ofre on the other side it. 10 sec to get there  her had to take a bac. Get there her had to take one step ford it

was 2 o cok in the morning her falod to sleep at 3 0 cok her
got up and carried on to find this pink Daffodil that was so huge it took 1 day to get there at last I got here had to tack a long time to get there was people there it was like a destr there but on the other side there was. A beche and there was lots of people there  it was amazzy
Was I got there was crabes, tree, dofese and there was lot of kids their was house even a free treehouse for free it was old but I make it nice I even patit  10 Daffodil’s. Outside of the treehouse it look cool then the Nets day I had a hot Chocolate with   Sprinkled and I got a colored. That like eta the colored will eat intheking it see the way.

there is going to be a foster Nets to my treehouse. They sater to grow they 5 day came and the tree wroun as tall then me the tree was as dig is my house. It had brarch like stars on it but not like woderit or. Drike stars it was grows I have not saw the tree grows like this it was cool so when it stat was 2sec ago I saw I was get hit up It was hiyr they my treehouse I was so scared of hit I was crying I was so sad so I hold the

tree I did. Not like it up her so I grad a lot of wood then I bet A house with lot of rope  with my Magical powers the rope was not break a ball so I sated Build A bed it was caffe then my  bed at the treehouse
I like how the day’s fend A house to stare at it was cool I  what to do my trip Again it was a cool week feeding lot of Daffodil.

WALT create a piece of writing which includes 5 words that we have been
given. This week the words were: pink huge brids sprinkled and daffodil.

Friday, 13 April 2018

Art Attack

                                                         this term we have been creating pieces of art as our kaupapa has been art attack
we have been learning how to write explanations using different scenarios we have to choose 3 objects to solve the problem and then write how we used them. we have to move the  box into odrer 

Paikea and the whale


we have been using higher order thinking skills to complete our Maori myth and I legend slide.

Tuesday, 17 October 2017

Newsper report

News report
He was dreaming about drowning in the  cold water he couldn’t  move a thing he couldn’t breathe he tried to get out but he couldn't. Some  nice people came to help me but I was stuck and I didn't think that I was going to get out. I sat down on my  bouncy bed crying and then I new that it was just from my dream. I was trying to get out of bed but I couldn't my legs  was stuck to the bed it was just me dreaming . I yelled to my mum
She Got me out of bed.

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Friday, 22 September 2017

Te ngahere

Wal about te ngahere, the rakau, the kararehe,the manu and the risks to the forest.

Thursday, 24 August 2017

The mudslide

Week 5   #45

World Events for your writing
I’m sure you won’t have missed the events in Barcelona, Spain this week or the devastation caused by the mud slide in Sierre Leone and the violence in Charlottesville, Virginia. The prompt this week uses the emotions that the media has shown us.

Latest prompt
As I said at the top of this page, the events around the world this week:

… as it came rushing towards us we…
The mudslide
There was a mudslide it was as big as a ship. Then over night there was  200 people that were killed in the night. I heard people yelling  I run  outside there were people , trying to get out of the mud.Then there were people asking for my help.
“Can you help me?”. I said
“ There yelling”they  asked for my for help. Wait I’m coming I said
“Sorry but I can't help you”. I will get stuck in the yucky drowning sticky  mud.I am going to have to run away now so good bye people” I said I am sorry