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He was dreaming about drowning in the cold water he couldn’t move a thing he couldn’t breathe he tried to get out but he couldn't. Some nice people came to help me but I was stuck and I didn't think that I was going to get out. I sat down on my bouncy bed crying and then I new that it was just from my dream. I was trying to get out of bed but I couldn't my legs was stuck to the bed it was just me dreaming . I yelled to my mum
She Got me out of bed.
Hey Kisziah,
ReplyDeleteI am Jade C from the Summer Learning Journey blogging team 2017-2018. I will be blogging with you this summer! I hope you are having a wonderful time with your friends and your family!
Your writing reminds me of my own freaky nightmares! I was glad to read at the end that it was a nightmare and all a dream because it would have been a horror story if it carried on! You are an amazing writer as you are really good at creating suspense and tension in your writing. I would love to read more of your creative writings and comment on them. Isn't it amazing how we can share our learning and fun ideas together through blogging online?
I would love to blog more with you! To help you get started with blogging this summer, I have included the link to our Summer Learning Journey activities list.
https://sites.google.com/site/summerlearningjourney/weekly-activities
Let's go on the Summer Learning Journey together!
All the best,
Jade C.